Comments & Complements from readers and players

[Bryancd]

LOL. I asked everyone for their opinions about how we should deal with the holodeck. You said Kenny and I need to "just make a decision". :D

I'm open to what the people want. Comments?

LOL!  :roflmao

Well, what I meant was a decision to stop the holodeck program immediately and get to the mission back last week. We didn't quite get there. We sort of have tried to split the difference and still haven't found Kenny yet! Since we never really pulled the trigger on ending this, let's see it through! :)

[Rico]

I just want to make a brief, general comment on the RPG.

This is Jen & Kenny's project.  They put a great deal of time, effort and hard work into it.  While others also spend time writing some great posts, they are still the ultimate decision makers.  If they decide they want feedback I know they will ask.  As for the current situation I think Jen has made it pretty clear the direction she is taking things.  So let's all work on writing some new, interesting posts in the story and let them handle the rest.

[Meds]

Well i just love writing this RPG and i have had an absolute blast writing with Eric and i have enjoyed writing with everyone on the end big posts . I'd like to offer out a big thank you to both Kenny and Jen for all their hard work, and I'd also like to say thanks and well done to all the great writers of the RPG.

[wraith1701]

  ???  Can I have a mod repair a section I wrote for the last joint post?  The line I wrote was-

"One thing was certain, in any event.  Despite her apparent conversancy with fighting, she seemed to have a healthy dose of her people's belief in their infallibility."

Somehow, someone changed conversancy (personal knowledge or information about someone or something) to conservancy (environmental conservation).  Sorry if this comes of as being silly, but I'm kind of neurotic when it comes to someone changing the meaning of something that I wrote.  :ohwell

[Jen]

I did a spell check... it's possible I inadvertently clicked "change" instead of ignore. I did not do it on purpose and I didn't change anything Aria would say. If you need something changed, I can edit the posts...just tell me what it is you want altered.

[Geekyfanboy]

DONE...

  ???  Can I have a mod repair a section I wrote for the last joint post?  The line I wrote was-

"One thing was certain, in any event.  Despite her apparent conversancy with fighting, she seemed to have a healthy dose of her people's belief in their infallibility."

Somehow, someone changed conversancy (personal knowledge or information about someone or something) to conservancy (environmental conservation).  Sorry if this comes of as being silly, but I'm kind of neurotic when it comes to someone changing the meaning of something that I wrote.  :ohwell

[wraith1701]

Thanks!  :) :) :)

[Jen]

I was working on that... you beat me to it.

DONE...

  ???  Can I have a mod repair a section I wrote for the last joint post?  The line I wrote was-

"One thing was certain, in any event.  Despite her apparent conversancy with fighting, she seemed to have a healthy dose of her people's belief in their infallibility."

Somehow, someone changed conversancy (personal knowledge or information about someone or something) to conservancy (environmental conservation).  Sorry if this comes of as being silly, but I'm kind of neurotic when it comes to someone changing the meaning of something that I wrote.  :ohwell

[Jen]

If we're going to discuss plot ideas, let's do it in the Season Seven OOC and leave this section for the kudos for the writers and comments on their posts. I'm going to post some details/ideas now so look for it there.

[Meds]

A massive bunch of kudo's to everyone writing. Just read Omra's post set in the afterburner. I cried with laughter, oh man that last line is going to stay with me all week. Brilliant. Great writing with you all.

[Bryancd]

The whole Afterburner scene was great!

[Jen]

Final Briefing To Come Tomorrow 12ish Central Time
I'm just going to write the post as if Sevryll and Quinn completed the meeting, assigned crewmen to two away teams and then asked for questions/suggestions. If your character has anything to contribute to the meeting, follow up posts to the briefing will be your chance to do so. If you have anything for your character to do before that meeting, do it before 12ish Central.  ;)

I'm going to have Sevryll dismiss the meeting and order Ryla to begin the surgical alterations, since Peterson will undergo them as well and will need to begin preparations for the mission.

These people can attend the meeting, those listed here, who are not senior officers can come at the request of their senior officers:

Quinn
Sevryll
Aeric (Second Officer/ Operations)
Peterson (CMO)
K'ararth (Engineering)
K'Tan (Tactical)
Margon (Counselor)
Aria (Civilian Medic)
Ryla (Surgical Alterations)
Spring (Botanist)
D'Callan (Security)
and Korridan (Engineering- maintenance, repair)

[wraith1701]

The sky transitioned from blue-green to vermillion, as the Ter'Oss sun submerged itself in the sea of grass on the distant horizon. Daylight sank with the Population I Star and took with it, the warmth of the day.  Twelve hours earlier, the sun's rays had welcomed Sevryll by caressing her jade skin with an embrace of heat. Now the cool night air nipped at her like a cornered animal. A bitter breeze stirred, prompting the fine hairs at the nape of her neck to stand on end. Sevryll subdued the urge to shiver, and headed back to the runabout where replicated wool blankets, robes and shawls were stowed. The Vulcan seemed to be swallowed up by the gaping mouth of an invisible monster, as she entered the emitter-cloaked vessel.

Incredible post, Jen!  I dig your use of metaphor and simile here; you've painted the scene so vividly, not only can I see it, I can feel it!  This is the type of word-picture I strive to paint when I post;  I bow before your talent!  Once again, awesome job!!! 

[Jen]

 :blush Thank you for the complement Eric.

[Jen]

Just X, Wraith and Institches: I LOVE that scene. It was very well written, and exceedingly clever and creative. I love The Wizard of Oz, and this post's comedy reminded me a bit of the scene where the Scare Crow, Tin Man and Lion jump the Witch's soldiers to steal their uniforms. That's intended as a complement btw. Bravo. :D

Awesome job on the follow up Eric! I love the way you transitioned the poker game. I had to research to write those scenes... Bryan said he wasn't much of a card player either so we weren't very sure what to do next. :D I was hoping it would have an interesting ending. Thanks for tying those loose strings into a nice bow for us. FYI, I think the festival sounds like FUN. Great idea!