Comments & Complements from readers and players

X · October 24, 2007, 09:01:30 AM

Quote from: Jen on October 24, 2007, 04:14:47 AM
Great joint post Kenny and X! Quinn is pretty ticked... Aeric has a lot of work to do to convince his commanding officers that he's a value to the crew and trustworthy. Poor guy...he's got rotten luck.

It hit me when I was reading this post that the Captain and XO have no clue what Areic is talking about when he refers to Temporal Defense or orders from another Temporal agent. Quinn and Sevryll should probably ask him that question at some point.

Aeric was glad it got washed over. His investigation isn't done and the temporal prime directive isn't something to toy with ... or is it?

Geekyfanboy · October 29, 2007, 12:04:51 PM

Wraith your writing is superb, very detailed, it's like being there... great job. You'll be a great addition to the crew.

KingIsaacLinksr · October 29, 2007, 12:30:37 PM

I agree with StarTrekFanatic5, your writing is very very good.

King Linksr

X · October 30, 2007, 08:48:37 AM

Great posts guys! Keep up the good work.

Rico · October 30, 2007, 08:55:31 AM

Agreed. Really interesting stuff gang. Anyone here could write a book if they wanted to. Just wish I could find a bit more time to post more.

wraith1701 · October 30, 2007, 06:52:37 PM

Thanks for the kind words, guys. :blush Like Rico and Just X said, everyone is doing some outstanding work on the RPG. The participants are all very imaginative, and have given their characters a lot of depth. I also love the fact that everyone is working together to move the story forward; it's cool to see posts that are collaborations between different players. It gives the game coherence and makes each post seem like a logical part of a single large story. I participated in an RPG on another forum that didn't have the cooperation and structure that this one does, and it eventually evolved into a mish-mash of unrelated stories that ended up going nowhere. With the quality of the folks involved here, I don't see any danger of that happening to this RPG.

I'm honored to be in such great company here! :)

KingIsaacLinksr · October 31, 2007, 02:32:46 PM

I want to thank Jen, Just X and Moyer777 with the help with Isaac's character and posts. I really want to thank Just X for bouncing off ideas from him. Thanks man!

King Linksr

Jen · October 31, 2007, 04:25:31 PM

You're welcome. :)

X · October 31, 2007, 04:36:40 PM

yeah, ditto. I'm more than happy to help.

wraith1701 · November 02, 2007, 04:55:12 AM

As always, very nice job on that last post, Just x! :) I liked the Kobayashi-Maru tactic; it drew me in to the action and really spiced up the story. Nicely done!

KingIsaacLinksr · November 02, 2007, 09:16:12 AM

Quote from: wraith1701 on November 02, 2007, 04:55:12 AM
As always, very nice job on that last post, Just x! :) I liked the Kobayashi-Maru tactic; it drew me in to the action and really spiced up the story. Nicely done!

/agree. Very nice post Just X.

King Linksr

Geekyfanboy · November 02, 2007, 09:20:59 AM

Yeah when I stared to read that I kept telling myself.. man he just advanced the plot forward.. we haven't even gotten that far in the story... then he give permission to fire on the ships and I'm thinking.. I'm going to need to talk to his guy about command structure but when I got to the end and saw it was a holodeck program...I breathed a sign of relief. Cool post...

KingIsaacLinksr · November 02, 2007, 09:25:59 AM

Quote from: StarTrekFanatic5 on November 02, 2007, 09:20:59 AM
Yeah when I stared to read that I kept telling myself.. man he just advanced the plot forward.. we haven't even gotten that far in the story... then he give permission to fire on the ships and I'm thinking.. I'm going to need to talk to his guy about command structure but when I got to the end and saw it was a holodeck program...I breathed a sign of relief. Cool post...

My first worry was that Just X has forgotten that the Tiberius is not anywhere near Romulus. That he had had some sort of amnesia and figured: "Hey, lets talk about ships at romulus." LOL LOL LOL

Good post!

King Linksr

X · November 02, 2007, 09:45:48 AM

Thank you. Now that we have this nice list of people on the ship, I thought it would be nice to give a few of them some screen time. I'm going to try to define some of the people on the flight deck so that they can be developed for other parts in the story. I at least want to get some of their skills and personality out in the open even if some of them are going to stay background players.

Jen · November 02, 2007, 11:36:38 AM

Quote from: StarTrekFanatic5 on November 02, 2007, 09:20:59 AM
Yeah when I stared to read that I kept telling myself.. man he just advanced the plot forward.. we haven't even gotten that far in the story... then he give permission to fire on the ships and I'm thinking.. I'm going to need to talk to his guy about command structure but when I got to the end and saw it was a holodeck program...I breathed a sign of relief. Cool post...

LOL...I thought the same thing Kenny. Then I thought, "no, wait Just X writing this...I bet he's just being clever and writing a sim program."

Good post X. :)

Nice job everyone! The season is progressing very well. You are all doing great!

FYI, for those of you who have gotten behind in the story... it's ok, you can still jump back in. We have yet to really get into the main plot yet. If you need a quick synopsis, PM me and I'll send you one.